tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post1439952360448882028..comments2024-03-25T17:56:01.825-04:00Comments on Insecure Writer's Support Group: The Head and Heart of Your CharacterAlex J. Cavanaughhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-83866821681448929112016-03-01T12:50:53.317-05:002016-03-01T12:50:53.317-05:00The examples illustrate what you mean by Deep POV....The examples illustrate what you mean by Deep POV. Really helps me figure it out. Thanks!J.Q. Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04710790553616621103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-82763435737578260682016-02-22T15:13:56.900-05:002016-02-22T15:13:56.900-05:00Very glad to hear the post was helpful. Thanks for...Very glad to hear the post was helpful. Thanks for letting me know. Joylene Nowell Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04497637513532136615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-13606163649092969072016-02-21T11:20:33.343-05:002016-02-21T11:20:33.343-05:00As I new writer with a steep learning curve, I lov...As I new writer with a steep learning curve, I love your excellent tips and outstanding examples. I'm building a reference document, <i>Writing With Color</i>. Thank you.Lynn La Vitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07946462373947759641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-8967713174747451652016-02-17T07:03:25.040-05:002016-02-17T07:03:25.040-05:00Niiice. I've never tried losing myself in writ...Niiice. I've never tried losing myself in writing a character. It scares me, but in a good way.Lux G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00557863683608790087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-28087156128244200802016-02-16T09:43:16.097-05:002016-02-16T09:43:16.097-05:00Examples help so much!
Thank you!
HeatherExamples help so much!<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />HeatherHeather M. Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-18124321236754040772016-02-16T09:26:37.607-05:002016-02-16T09:26:37.607-05:00I love that you give the tips WITH examples. So of...I love that you give the tips WITH examples. So often people forget to give examples. Thank you. I appreciate this more than you could know. Bookmarking. Robyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-74504479374904621872016-02-16T08:14:20.637-05:002016-02-16T08:14:20.637-05:00You've given some really good ideas to think a...You've given some really good ideas to think about. I certainly need to work on replacing dialog tags with more action. Thanks for the examples! Sherry Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13381887565717348293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-89838379178767160562016-02-16T03:34:59.930-05:002016-02-16T03:34:59.930-05:00I love the excerpt of your ms The Omatiwak -- it h...I love the excerpt of your ms The Omatiwak -- it had me riveted! Your techniques are working well for you, and great advice for others, so keep it up! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07735576044552810103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-57942364882018026292016-02-16T00:55:14.888-05:002016-02-16T00:55:14.888-05:00Great examples. I've been practising deep POV....Great examples. I've been practising deep POV. Still a long way to go. I'm also working hard on replacing dialogue tags with action. It's all about striking a balance. I think.Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-18459685887805082432016-02-15T23:45:11.779-05:002016-02-15T23:45:11.779-05:00Thanks, everyone!Thanks, everyone!Joylene Nowell Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04497637513532136615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-67633495050518135512016-02-15T21:11:52.325-05:002016-02-15T21:11:52.325-05:00Excellent examples. You're pulling on the stre...Excellent examples. You're pulling on the strengths of showing not telling.Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-40068497723756344072016-02-15T18:01:19.491-05:002016-02-15T18:01:19.491-05:00Thanks for the tips! I have been trying to replac...Thanks for the tips! I have been trying to replace dialogue tags with action lately, because I feel like it adds a lot more to the story. I'll have to give some of the others a try!L.G. Keltnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-10869857356695343672016-02-15T14:26:24.463-05:002016-02-15T14:26:24.463-05:00These are powerful examples of how much is reveale...These are powerful examples of how much is revealed through even small gestures. Thanks for this post, Joylene, and thanks for dropping by recently, Michelle.<br />A great week to all.Rawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-988831549630189322016-02-15T12:06:19.393-05:002016-02-15T12:06:19.393-05:00In my last manuscript, I worked like the proverbia...In my last manuscript, I worked like the proverbial devil to get rid of tags. My editor put most of them back. I think I'm fighting a losing battle. cleemckenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456109243453726483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-78992556182539042602016-02-15T09:31:28.719-05:002016-02-15T09:31:28.719-05:00I can't think of more perfect examples! Terrif...I can't think of more perfect examples! Terrific post ;-)<br />diedre Knighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12772557495518846226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-73361158626054556712016-02-15T04:49:57.206-05:002016-02-15T04:49:57.206-05:00Getting rid of speech tags and showing instead of ...Getting rid of speech tags and showing instead of telling is something I do my best to apply in my writing. Nevertheless, I miss opportunities to show instead of telling, and am grateful to my contents editor who always points that out.Rosemary Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11246565740097088493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-72079186832811616832016-02-14T20:11:03.515-05:002016-02-14T20:11:03.515-05:00Very excellent examples. I look for ways to get ri...Very excellent examples. I look for ways to get rid of those tags on my second draft. The more you do it, the easier it becomes to not write it that way in the first place.Susan Gourley/Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02669793865290876168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-10367568994265252942016-02-14T19:08:51.506-05:002016-02-14T19:08:51.506-05:00Good tips indeed. I need to get away from the whol...Good tips indeed. I need to get away from the whole he said, he stated, thing a bit more I think.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-35952264822834330912016-02-14T19:03:05.450-05:002016-02-14T19:03:05.450-05:00Thanks for tips and examples! Thanks for tips and examples! Leandra Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00381034024025750992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-7307022935340460602016-02-14T15:20:21.108-05:002016-02-14T15:20:21.108-05:00That's a great post, and very helpful indeed. ...That's a great post, and very helpful indeed. It offers more clarity into the concept of dialogue. Nice of you to share, greetings! Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-11185886272582477802016-02-14T14:37:49.392-05:002016-02-14T14:37:49.392-05:00Great post. Yes very helpful examples. I have do...Great post. Yes very helpful examples. I have done the 1st person pov switch before, but dialogue tags replaced with action I had thought of that way before. I did it sort of hit and miss, but did not think about the effect to do all of them. <br /><br />Thanks Jolene<br /><br /><a href="http://www.junetakey.com/posts/iwsg-january-2016/" rel="nofollow"> Juneta @ Writer's Gambit </a><br />Juneta keyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08815758043024184034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-85782899830792163172016-02-14T13:40:08.580-05:002016-02-14T13:40:08.580-05:00One thing I've noticed with Deep POV is how he...One thing I've noticed with Deep POV is how helpful the examples are. They really help me see the difference and make it easier to apply to my own writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3136420115688099157.post-11116038640637072182016-02-14T09:52:12.726-05:002016-02-14T09:52:12.726-05:00How very clever. And not hard to do. Thank you *sm...How very clever. And not hard to do. Thank you *smiles*Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.com