Wednesday, October 2, 2024

Ghost in The IWSG Day Machine

 

Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!

Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer - aim for a dozen new people each time - and return comments. This group is all about connecting! Be sure to link to this page and display the badge in your post. 

And please be sure your avatar links back to your blog! Otherwise, when you leave a comment, people can't find you to comment back.

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG and hashtag is #IWSG.

The awesome co-hosts for the October 2nd posting of the IWSG are Nancy Gideon, Jennifer Lane, Jacqui Murray, and Natalie Aguirre!

Every month, we announce a question that members can answer in their IWSG post. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience or story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say. 

Remember, the question is optional!

October 2 Question - Ghost stories fit right in during this month. What's your favorite classic ghostly tale? Tell us about it and why it sends chills up your spine. 

Got any favorite ghostly tales? I'm trying to think if I do. Does Ghostbusters count?

Ones based on "real" life I tend to find interesting. Whether that is interesting in an eye roll worthy way or in a creepy way, I guess that all depends on the tale.

The Mothman is one that just popped into my head. Not really creepy, as he/she/it was never truly evil by the retellings. Poor Mothman was just there to try to warn people.

Think of any good ghost stories yet? Ever hear of The Mothman? Maybe it is related to Bigfoot and Nessie. You think?

Monday, September 23, 2024

Using Tropes: The Good, the Bad, and the Amazing OR How To Upcycle Tropes and Keep Them Fresh

 

TROPE: A common or overused story element (a character type, plot structure,

theme, device, setting, etc.) that appears in many stories

 

The chosen one, a sunrise as a symbol for new beginnings, the enemies-to-lovers plotline… we’ve seen these time and again in multiple stories across multiple genres. That’s what makes them tropes, because they crop up so often they’ve become recognizable to a wide audience. Ironically, their widespread use is why they sometimes get a bad rap. But when they’re applied properly, they do more good than bad and can really enhance your story.

 

What’s Good About Tropes?

 

Let’s see how tropes are beneficial and why you may want to incorporate one (or more) into your WIP.

 


They Come with Certain Baked-In Elements.
Tropes are identified by a set of common aspects. Take the reluctant hero, for instance. There’s a lot of room for variation, but at the heart of this trope is a character who is underachieving, has commitment issues, is driven by an underlying fear, and clings to the status quo. So if you’re story calls for this kind of protagonist, you don’t have to reinvent the wheel. You already have a basic outline for who they are, which makes your job that much easier.

 

Tropes Are Familiar to Readers. Most of us have seen tropes like the reluctant hero many times. This makes them easily recognizable to readers, who will know (to a certain degree) what they’re getting. In this way, tropes can provide familiarity and comfort, which enhances the reader’s overall experience.

 

They Set Expectations. Each reader has their own preferences, which results in them being drawn to certain kinds of stories. We see this when a person repeatedly opts for happily-ever-after romances, or books with ensemble casts, or a rags-to-riches plotline. Each kind of story has certain characteristics that make it that kind of story. If you know what your readers like, and certain tropes fit the bill, including one can increase your chance of giving them more of what they want.

 

What’s Bad About Tropes?

 

Unfortunately, tropes work a bit like dual-edged swords because if they’re not handled well, the things that make them beneficial can also do harm.

 

Tropes Aren’t Original. Because readers have seen your character/theme/device before, they have a general idea of what to expect, and that’s a good thing. But while some familiarity is good, most people also want variation. They want familiar, not identical, and as authors, we fail to deliver when we stick too close to the trope script. We write it exactly as we’ve seen it before, and the trope becomes clichéd and hackneyed. If our story elements lack originality and imagination, they’re not going to hold a reader’s attention for long.

 

They Can Be Too Predictable. Again, some familiarity is good, but if a trope is so commonplace that readers know exactly what’s going to happen…poof! The magic is gone.

 

We Tend to Overuse Them. Sometimes we writers can get overly comfortable with a successful plotline, device, or character type, and before we know it, it’s going into every one of our stories. I have a favorite author who writes books with female protagonists who, for some reason, always end up accidentally pregnant at some point. Each book has different characters, motivations, and scenarios, but the same device is used in all of them. It started reading as inauthentic—a crutch for the author rather than a meaningful event for the character—and I found myself looking for other stories to read.

 

So, tropes can be really useful, but only when they’re handled properly. If we want to keep readers engaged and coming back for more, we have to mix things up and use old tropes in new ways.

 

The Right Way to Use a Trope

 

So how do we embrace tropes while avoiding predictability, cliché, and a lack of imagination?

 

1.       Identify the non-negotiables. The common elements that define a trope are important to identify because, like bumpers in the bowling gutters, they keep you on course. So if you’re thinking about writing a trope, research the elements associated with it, and make note of which ones you want to include.

 

Let’s say you’re writing a story with a Hero on a Quest plotline. Here are a few of the common elements for that trope that you might want to include:

 

·       A call to adventure that sets the protagonist on their path

·       Extensive travel across a realm or world

·       A series of trials that tests the character’s mettle, worthiness, or dedication to the goal

·       Taverns as gathering places

·       A system of magic or supernatural powers…

 

2.       Now ask yourself: Which of those elements can be reimagined? This is where we save the trope from becoming a cliché. We take the common factors, and we tweak some of them so they’re fresh and unusual but still recognizable. A reimagining of our Hero on a Quest elements might look like this:

 

·       The call comes, but the hero doesn’t heed it. He rejects it the first time around (à la Bilbo Baggins in The Hobbit), and needs a second, more urgent call to get him moving.

·       Instead of the protagonist jet-setting around the world, their travel will be limited to their own city, or a nearby castle, or an amusement park.

·       Rather than the standard tavern, the protagonist will meet up with others in coffee shops or in deserted buildings on the outskirts of each town that have been claimed by outcasts and travelers.

 

3.       Meld Genres. Tropes are often tied to genre, so a good way to keep them fresh is to see how they could apply to a different kind of story. This can be especially helpful in the planning stages—when you don’t know what the story’s about but you do know it includes a certain trope.

 

The Hero on a Quest plotline is most often associated with fantasy, but how might it be incorporated into other genres?

 

·       Romance: A pen-pal relationship blossoms into what could be true love, so the protagonist crosses the world to meet their possible soulmate.

·       Mystery: The sleuth protagonist’s quest revolves around solving a mystery, the clues for which are scattered abroad.

·       Horror: To survive and find freedom, the main character must sneak (unscathed) from the top floor to the ground level of a zombie-infested office building.

·       Science Fiction: The protagonist’s quest will take them to new places via virtual reality instead of on the back of a horse.

 


This is a great exercise for reimagining a trope. It also can also result in new story ideas you hadn’t considered before.

 

Bottom line: Tropes can be super useful—when we don’t write them as tired and overdone. With just a little bit of brainstorming, they can become new and interesting while maintaining the familiarity readers crave.

 


Becca Puglisi
is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and other resources for writers. Her books have sold over 1 million copies and are available in multiple languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online resource for authors that's home to the Character Builder and Storyteller's Roadmap tools.

Monday, September 9, 2024

5 Unexpected Plot Devices to Consider for Your Next Story

Let's welcome Reedsy writer, Savannah Cordova who has shared plot devices to consider when writing your next novel. Thank you, Savannah!

Wednesday, September 4, 2024

Are You a Visitor? Here's How You Can Join Us!




The first Wednesday of every month
is officially IWSG Day. 
The IWSG was formed by
Ninja Captain Alex Cavanaugh

Members post about their doubts and fears, 
discuss struggles and triumphs, 
and offer words of encouragement
to others who are struggling.                                   




If you are a visitor to this site, here is some information about our group.

The most important thing is that The IWSG is all about connecting!
It doesn't matter where you are in your writing journey, everyone is welcome!
Members are really supportive and encouraging to fellow writers.

A great way to connect with other writers is to join our blogging group.
You can join by going to the IWSG Sign-up page here.
Everything you need to know about participating is on this page.
Just follow the simple directions.

The only requirements of this group are that you publish a post 
on the first Wednesday of the Month on IWSG Day
and that you visit around in the group by clicking on blogs listed on the Sign-up page.

Most members try to visit about 12 members on IWSG Day.
For starters, you can always connect with our volunteer co-hosts
by reading their posts and leaving a comment.

That's what I did.  I jumped in, visited around, and left comments.
Twelve years later I have wonderful blogging buddies, and now I'm a new IWSG Admin.

This month our awesome co-hosts for the September 4th posting of the IWSG 

Are you worried about what to put in a post?
Don't!  We've got this covered!

Every month, we announce a question that members can answer in their IWSG post. 
These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience, or story. 
Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post,
or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say.
Remember, the question is optional.

Some of the things I like to post about on IWSG Day are: 
brief reviews of books written by other members,
interesting books I've read on writing or other topics,
news about my writing progress,
and my response to the monthly question.

I always include photos and sometimes memes, but that is not a requirement.
I get great ideas for future posts by visiting the posts of others.

September 4 Question - Since it's back to school time, let's talk English class. 
What's a writing rule you learned in school that messed you up as a writer?

I'm sure that there will be many interesting answers to this question.
What has messed me up as a writer is not a rule,
but emigrating from Canada to the USA.
I have Canadian and American English scrambled in my brain.

I know that blogging is less popular than it once was,
but it remains a wonderful way to connect with other writers,
learn about all aspects of writing and publishing,
and, best of all, make friends in the writing community.

Come join us!  Jump in with a post!





Till next time ~
Fundy Blue.

 

Monday, August 26, 2024

More Ways Than One To Skin A Cat




That's a terrible title about skinning a cat, but I thought it worked for this post. I apologize to all cat lovers. Rest assured, I would never harm a feline or any animal for that matter. So let's get on with today's post, which has nothing to do with cats, but everything to do with different approaches.


I love a good mystery that thrills me and keeps me in suspense until the end. The careful plotting is what fascinates me, and perhaps that’s because I’m a diehard pantser. I love the freedom to explore possible plots and threads. I love it when characters intrude into the story and make it something different than I’d expected. 


The downside to being a pantser is it can lead to a muddled mess that I have to go back and fix. This can take time, and it often leads to frustration. When I do manage to come to a satisfying end, I’m ever so grateful. 


A few weeks ago I was listening to an interview with Alex Michaelides, the author of The Fury. What caught my attention was his admission to being a pantser for the first time when he wrote this latest mystery. His words echoed my feelings. I’m paraphrasing, but here’s what his message was. 


He needed to have the freedom to create this story, and the only way he could have that freedom was to simply start writing and find out where the character would take him. This was the first book he’d written as a pantser, and he was well-rewarded by the results.




Here’s the Amazon summary: A masterfully paced thriller about a reclusive ex-movie star and her famous friends whose spontaneous trip to a private Greek island is upended by a murder.


It has over a thousand ratings on Amazon and over twenty-two thousand on Goodreads. The average rating is four stars. 


Obviously, his approach to this story worked very well for him. I appreciate that a talented writer who usually plots turned to my way of writing. He let loose the reins of plot and let his character take the lead. 


This only goes to show there’s no one way to write a good story. However, I'm now questioning the message my title sends. I can't imagine one way to skin a cat let alone more. 


Moving on...


Here's a middle-of-the-road approach. I enjoyed reading this post and if you're a pantser who is teetering on the brink of plotting, you might find it interesting, too. 


Are you a pantser or a plotter, or do you strike for "pantser with suspenders"? 


Monday, August 19, 2024

6 Essential Books (That’ll Change How You Write Forever) by Alex J. Coyne

When other authors ask me to recommend my favorite writing books, I’ve noticed that my answers almost always include the same recommendations.

Authors go through a unique formative experience, each individually, and the works that stick during this period will be ones that they’ll continue going back to - even years later. It’s as important as the music you discovered back in your teenage years.

Need some writing inspiration, or just damn good writing advice?

Here’s my list of 6 essential books (that’ll change how you write forever).

1. The Great Shark Hunt: Strange Tales from a Strange Time
Hunter S. Thompson - Amazon

The Great Shark Hunt is a gonzo journalism standard, and it’s where you should go after Fear & Loathing in Las Vegas. While it’s not a book about writing advice, it contains plenty of advice and thoughts that could be useful for any serious wordsmith.

The collection of Hunter S. Thompson’s letters and columns first published in 1979, exploring the author’s thoughts on pop culture, sports, politics, and more.

One of the articles addresses the world of freelance journalism, starting with the following phrase:

“You asked me for an article on whatever I wanted to write about and since you don't pay I figure that gives me carte blanche.”

It expands into a feature about author and journalist Lionel Olay, which Thompson describes as “a freelance writer, hustler, grass-runner, and general free spirit.”

If you didn’t know, Olay wrote The Dark Corners of the Night and Heart of a Stranger; the author was a personal inspiration to Thompson.

What’s the lesson?

Write, and write well - occasionally, write for free, and it could get you as many readers as a full-page, paid advertisement would have done.

2. Mugging the Muse: Writing Fiction for Love and Money

Holly Lisle - Amazon

Sympathy for the Devil is one of my all-time favorite works of fiction, with a plot that hinges upon a career nurse that requests ultimate forgiveness - for the devil himself. It’s a rare, deliciously dark plot that I can only describe as a true page-turner -- and how I discovered this particular tome of writing advice.

Mugging the Muse is by the same author, Holly Lisle, and one of the few writing books that doesn’t beat around the bush when it comes to what full-time authorship is about.

It’s not just about your sentences and paragraphs, but also about financial planning and survival. As the book says, you’re going to mix successful months with what the author terms “canned bean months” -- and it can be true when you’re making a living as a writer.

3. On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft
Stephen King - Amazon

Stephen King is an author that you’re either going to love or hate, and each for your own reasons: there’s classic horror like The Shining and Secret Window, Secret Garden -- but also an expansion into crime-writing that includes novels like The Colorado Kid.

On Writing is filled with rare, useful writing advice that comes from an experienced voice.

In it, you’ll find gems like the quotes, “Books are a uniquely portable magic,” and “The road to hell is paved with adverbs,”

King recommends persistence and documents, here, some of his own writing journey.

The book uses the hotel-themed horror story 1408 as its main plotting example -- and it’s a great way to illustrate how a story and its scenes can evolve into something an editor will publish.

4. How to Write a Damn Good Novel: A Step-by-Step No Nonsense Guide to Dramatic Storytelling
James N. Frey - Amazon

The Guide to Dramatic Storytelling first appeared in 1987, with a later sequel published in 1994: you’ll find this book on many recommended reading lists, and that’s because it’s a solid book of writing advice -- and it takes you through essential things like plotting, scenes, structure, and creating stronger stories.

Even if you’ve never read anything else by James N. Frey, I would recommend that you page through this one at least once.

Learn that dramatic storytelling sells, but also learn that overly-dramatic storytelling doesn’t.

The sentence that stands out the most through the years of reading (and re-reading this book) would be this one: “To set a forest on fire, you light a match. To set a character on fire, you put him in conflict.”

Have fun with that.

5. Telling Lies for Fun & Profit: A Manual for Fiction Writers
Lawrence Block - Amazon

Lawrence Block is a crime fiction author, whom is perhaps best known for creating the private investigator Matt Scudder. However, since this is a post on writing advice, I’m going to recommend his book Telling Lies for Fun & Profit: A Manual for Fiction Writers.

He’s been writing since the publication of his first novel in 1958, and here’s where you can find some of the best advice on writing fiction while you’re getting paid for it.

The golden phrase from this book is, “If you are trying to write realistic fiction and you people it extensively with overdrawn characters, you’re working against yourself.”

In simple terms, don’t spread your characters (or your plot) too thinly: readers always notice.

Enjoy your story, and you’ll find that more readers are willing to do the same.

6. The Elements of Style


William Strunk Jr. - Amazon

The Elements of Style, also called Strunk & White for short, is one of the books you’ll find recommended in one of this list’s other recommendations (Stephen King’s On Writing).

It’s been in regular publication (with multiple editions) since 1920, and it’s a standard within newspaper journalism and other professional writing. You’re missing out if you haven’t browsed through The Elements of Style at least once.

The advice I’ve relied on the longest from this particular book says, “Omit needless words,” -- or in longer terms: “When a sentence is made stronger, it usually becomes shorter. Thus, brevity is a by-product of vigor.”

Bio: Alex J. Coyne is a journalist, author, and proofreader. He has written for a variety of publications and websites, with a radar calibrated for gothic, gonzo, and the weird. Sometimes, he co-writes with others.

Wednesday, August 7, 2024

 


The first Wednesday of every month is officially IWSG day. IWSG was formed by Ninja Captain Alex Cavanaugh. Members post about their doubts and fears, discuss struggles and triumphs, and offer words of encouragement to others who are struggling.

Twitter handle: @TheIWSG

Hashtag: #IWSG 

The awesome co-hosts for the August 7 posting of the IWSG are Feather Stone, Kim Lajevardi, Diedre Knight, C. Lee McKenzie, and Sarah-The Faux Fountain Pen.

Every month, we announce a question that members can answer in their IWSG post. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience or story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say.

Remember, the question is optional.

August 7 question - Do you use AI in your writing and if so how? Do you use it for  your posts? Incorporate it into your stories? Use it for research? Audio

I use IA for guest posts on specific topics and I have one audio that's AI. What about you?

AND

 

July/August Reviews in no particular order

* Disclaimer. If I run into an occasional typo, I ignore them and don't factor them into my review.

CATCH A TIGER BY THE TOE by Joe Congel

This is book twenty-six of twenty-seven in the Magnolia Bluffs Series and the second focused on Brandon Turner retired NYPD police officer.

In book twenty-six, there’s a serial killer on the loose, in this small Texas town, that has killed two young children and has his eye on a third. Beside each victim he leaves a stuffed toy tiger and a nursery rhyme. Brandon comes out of retirement to help the Magnolia Bluffs’ police catch the killer.

If anyone but Joe Congel had written this, I probably wouldn't have read it because of the subject matter: child murder. But being a Congel fan this was not an option. The story, as expected, was a riveting tale.  The author handled the subject matter with sensitivity and didn’t get bogged down with macabre details. The tension builds through the book and ends with a high-octane chase to catch the killer before he kills again AND offers some unexpected twists at the end.

If you are a murder mystery aficionado, a Congel fan or just appreciate a good tale I think you’ll enjoy this one as much as I did. 

Available at Amazon

 

THE SILVER LEOPARD by Zoe Cass

This is a classic example of the romantic suspense genre written in the 70s.

Caroline has escaped a lonely and unhappy childhood by moving to London and developing a successful career buying and selling antiques. With her mother's death, she is called back to Scotland where danger and evil linger.

Recommended for those that enjoy classic romantic suspense.

Available at Amazon

 



LEGEND IN GREEN VELVET by Elizabeth Peters

Elizabeth Peters at her best.

This is an enjoyable read about a young American on her way to work at a Scottish archeological dig when she gets embroiled in a murder. Sprinkled throughout with laugh-out-loud moments, this is a must read for Elizabeth Peters fans.

Available at Amazon 

 

AND 

New Releases

BECAUSE NO ONE NOTICED by C. Lee McKenzie

 

(Editors Pick)

 


Five juniors at Las Animas High have a long history together. They love, dislike, or tolerate each other depending on the day. Occupied with class assignments, career choices, family disharmony, and the usual teen turbulence, none of them thinks seriously of the danger lurking in their near future or how fragile and temporary life is.

Inspired by real-life tragedy, the story unfolds in alternating points of view as the characters explore the resilience of their hearts and their ability to rebuild their lives after a shattering tragedy.

Available at Amazon


MATEO'S WOMAN by Sandra Cox

Delilah is dead.

With her demise, everyone should be safe, but something insidious is happening to Mateo’s town and to the woman he loves. People are dying and Blair is changing, taking on mannerisms that are clearly not her own. Becoming a danger to herself and others. He has no idea what is happening to the town’s people but he has an inkling of what is happening to Blair and what he’s thinking just isn’t possible. But whether it’s possible or not, he has to pry Blair from the evil that’s sunk its fangs into her. Now it's a race against time to save the woman he loves and get to the bottom of who is killing Grizzly’s citizenry. And if that’s not enough of a challenge for the shapeshifting sheriff, his future mother-in-law has come for a visit.

Available at Amazon 


NOW OPTIONED FOR TELEVISION!
Every book can be read as a standalone mystery - hop in anywhere in the series!

USA Today and Wall Street Journal bestselling author Amy Vansant has her cast of characters embroiled in three Halloween hijinks --- a murder, a robbery, and a ghost story!

 Available at Amazon

AND

Did you know, Dr. Seuss (Theodore Seuss Geisel)  was credited for inventing the term nerd?

 


For more information: 20 Dr. Seuss Facts - Fun Facts You Didn't Know About Dr. Seuss - Parade