Monday, March 7, 2022

Considering and Using Character Wound

There has been a lot of debate about whether a character needs a wound, and what role the wound plays in characterization. Is a wound necessary? Do characters need some kind of deep trauma in order to give context to their present action behavior and plot? (Check out a very interesting article on the topic here:, free if you haven’t reached your monthly limit of New Yorker articles.)

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As a writing teacher, I do believe that imagining a backstory for your character can add the type of depth that a lot of stories require. After all, your character doesn’t just exist in the present context of their story. Their actions, reactions, worldview, struggles, etc. have come from somewhere. And while it’s true that the word “trauma” is bandied about, some would argue, too much, it’s an important tool to be aware of in your writing arsenal. (Another interesting consideration here:, free if you haven’t reached your monthly limit of New York Times articles.) Especially after these last two years, it seems that everything is getting the pop psychology “trauma” treatment.

Often, we teach that a character has a wound or trauma in their backstory, and that this creates their current need. For example, if they have been abandoned by a dismissive parent in their family of origin, they might be unconsciously searching for acceptance from their current situations, relationships, etc. The “need” differs from the “want” or “character objective” because it is generally not something they are willing or able to acknowledge until they realize it. The want or objective is something they are pursuing, ideally, from the beginning. The two can be very different, converging or switching places (in terms of prominence) only when the character realizes the forces that have been driving them all along.

Whether or not your character has a wound or a particular trauma in their backstory is, of course, up to you. There’s also something potentially interesting about having your character’s backstory be positive, rather than negative, in order to combat the trope of the tragic past. If you do choose to use the wound, here are some considerations:

  • Reveal the Wound Early: A major (to my thinking) mistake that a lot of writers make is the withholding of the wound. Then it’s revealed at the climax, or shortly before or after, during the “all is lost” (depending on whether you’re using these structures). Suddenly, everything snaps into focus and the character makes sense. I disagree completely with this approach. If we don’t know at least something about the wound and resulting need right away, we’re missing a big piece of the character’s deep identity. We may not see or understand what drives them, why they do what they do, etc. The withholding of crucial character information can work in some mystery/thriller/suspense plots, but otherwise, consider airing all or part of the wound early—so that readers can contextualize your character and understand them right away.
  • It Doesn’t Have to Be Huge: What’s significant to your character doesn’t have to be melodramatic or even a big deal to some others. All that matters is that it matters to them, and that readers know why. A missed connection, a cutting remark, the fracture of an early relationship, guilt over something that did or didn’t happen—these can be fertile ground for creating an unrequited need in a character.
  • Do Your Research: As referenced above, many people have a working knowledge of how trauma works on the human body, heart, soul, and mind. But tropes and clich├ęs about here, as you can see from my abandonment/acceptance example. Sometimes, significant experiences can manifest in interesting ways. Read up on the wound you plan to use, and don’t be afraid to supplement your creative thinking with more academic explorations, like The Body Keeps the Score by Bessel van der Kolk. 
  • Deploy Self-Awareness: Something that trips many writers up is the idea that the need/wound are largely unconscious. They can make the character do things against their own self-interest, and otherwise lead to some murky emotions. But I, for one, am also always telling writers to make their characters (more or less) self-aware. How do we square this seemingly contradictory advice? I’d say that the character needs to be aware of their wound (see above, about revealing it), though maybe not all of the ramifications of having it. As the story progresses, they should be open to doing more inquiry about themselves, and exhibit a growing self-awareness of the difference between their want (which drives the first act or more) and their need (which kicks in during act two and really comes full force into act three). A largely suppressed or unconscious character in denial can be tough to relate to for readers. Besides, being aware of something and then acting on that awareness are two very different things—it can take a while for the latter to kick in!
  • Consider Your Ending: As you wrap up a character’s story (at least for the current manuscript), consider how to resolve the need. Maybe it’s resolved completely—they get the acceptance they desire! Or maybe there’s more nuance to it—they get a temporary reprieve from the feelings originated by the wound, or they get an unexpected solution that’s different from what they originally wanted (or thought they did). Remember that characters aren’t straightforward, and neither are their endings. It’s rare (and rarely believable) that the perfect solution for one’s wound comes along—and that the effects of psychic satisfaction lasts forever. Maybe all your character gets is temporary support, understanding, visibility, peace, etc. Maybe that’s what they need, though, to be complete … for now.

A character’s backstory doesn’t have to be long, melodramatic, or complex. But I think it’s important to consider what shaped them in the past on their way to their present. Otherwise, you might end up with a character who exists without much anchoring—readers may not have a sense that they are fully fleshed out, simultaneously existing in the present, remembering their past, and thinking about their future. Add these considerations of the wound to your character portraits, and see what develops.

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Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

I've used past trauma in several of my books and yes, I made sure the character was aware of what was driving him.
Great tips, Mary, and thanks for joining us today.

Gina Gao said...

I have met many writers who have used past trauma to help with their writing.

Computer Tutor said...

What an interesting discussion. Thanks for sharing this.

Natalie Aguirre said...

Thanks for sharing your tips on how to use past trauma in a manuscript, Mary. It's good to know that the trauma doesn't have to be completely resolved in the story, especially since we often must learn to live with the effects a trauma has on our lives.

L. Diane Wolfe said...

Excellent tips - a person's past does shape their future and how they will react.

Elizabeth Seckman said...

Thank you. It bothers me that we're overusing "trauma". As someone who spent years working with abused children, I realized quite quickly that what I had considered trauma was a day in the park compared to some of what I heard and saw.

From a social work stand point, most times, the person with the issue is one of the last to fully realize how a past trauma is motivating their actions, so I can understand why a writer would feel it should be hidden until the end. But, considering your advice, I'm thinking in the first pages, show the behavior, mention the trauma and in the following pages allow the character to become aware, but don't leave the reader in the dark.

Thanks! I have a WIP this advice will help immensely!