Every writer’s mission is to pen a story that
draws readers in, offering familiarity when it comes to certain genre
expectations while also delivering something fresh so to be distinctive and memorable.
This is how to cultivate a loyal--and, fingers crossed, rabidly obsessed--reading
audience.
But heck, there’s a lot of stories out there.
And didn’t someone say there’s only so many plot forms to choose from? Is
“fresh” even possible?
YES.
When you know where to look, you can find a
kaleidoscope of unique ideas and apply them to any type of story to transform
it.
A Story’s Secret Weapon: Conflict
One of the easiest ways to offers that thrill
of “newness” for readers is to activate the power of conflict. In fiction, it
is the crucible that tests, bruises, and shapes our characters. Externally, it
pushes the plot onward by supplying the resistance needed to force characters
to scrutinize their world, make choices, and take action to get what they want.
Internally, conflict generates a tug-of-war between the character’s fears,
beliefs, needs, values, and desires. Ultimately, it forces them to choose
between an old, antiquated way of thinking and doing, or a new, evolved way of
being, because only one will help them get what they want.
Conflict touches everything:
plot, characters, arc, pacing, tension and more, and can be endlessly adapted
to generate fresh scenes, and scenarios that provide readers with something
special to experience.
Conflict Is Everywhere
The other beautiful thing about conflict is
how you can find it anywhere: the character’s career, relationships, duties, etc.,
or it can come from adversaries, nature, the supernatural, or even from within
themselves. And that’s just to start.
But no matter where your character is and
what is happening, there’s one eternal source for conflict that can always lead
you to a complication, obstacle, or blocker to clash with your character’s
goals: the setting.
The
location of each scene will contain inherent dangers and risks, meaning you can
mine those to create problems and remind the character of the cost of failure. Drawing
conflict from your setting also gives it a greater role in the story. Rather than be a “stage” for action
to unfold, your setting becomes a participant.
Here
are some things to keep in mind to draw the very best conflict from your
setting, making important story moments more intense, and offering that fresh
gauntlet of challenges for your character to navigate.
Choose Settings
Thoughtfully
Some
setting choices are obvious. If you need your character’s car to break down in
an isolated area, then a country road, campsite, or quarry might do the trick.
But conflict very often happens in an ordinary setting, like a retail store or
at home. In cases like these, when the story has dictated where events will
occur, up the ante by choosing a specific location that holds emotional value for your character. Instead of
choosing just any store, pick one with an emotional association—such as the
place the character was caught shoplifting as a teenager. Good or bad, any
setting that plays upon their emotional volatility will increase their chances
of saying or doing something they’ll regret.
And
while we’re talking about emotional value, don’t underestimate the symbolic weight of the objects within the scene. The backyard may be
a generic place to have a difficult conversation but put the characters next to
the treehouse their son used to play in before he got critically sick, and
you’ve already heightened their emotions, potentially adding additional
conflict to the scene.
It’s
also important to think about which settings contain infrastructure that will
make the character’s goal harder to reach. Maybe it’s a ravine the protagonist
will need to cross, a locked door to get through, or a security guard to evade.
Remember that the character's journey to achieve their goal shouldn't be a walk
in the park. Conflict is necessary in every scene, so choose settings that contain obstacles or provide poignant emotional
roadblocks.
Think about how conflict naturally evolves.
The character has an objective. They put together a plan and start pursuing
that goal. Then complications come along and make things interesting. Luckily,
there are lots of ways we can manipulate the setting to create additional
conflict scenarios.
Mess
with the Weather. Unexpected showers, a heat wave, an icy
driveway, the threat of a tornado—how can small and large weather considerations
create problems for your character?
Take
Away Transportation. No matter what setting you
choose, your character will need to move from one place to another. What kind
of transportation disruptions will make it harder for them to get where they
need to go?
Add
an Audience. Falling down in private is totally different
than doing it in a crowd of people. Both may be physically painful, but the
latter adds an element of emotional hardship. Who could you put in the
environment as a witness to the character's missteps or misfortune?
Trigger
Sensitive Emotions. Conflict is easier to handle for
an even-keeled, emotionally cool character. So use the setting to throw them
off balance. If they're struggling to put food on the table, place them in a
locale where wealthy characters are eating lavishly and throwing away
leftovers. Likewise, a character with daddy issues can be triggered in an
environment that highlights healthy and loving father-daughter relationships.
So when you’re planning the setting for a scene, ask yourself: What could I add
specifically for my character in this situation that will elevate their
emotions?
Exploit
What They Don’t Have. If your character doesn’t have a
light source, place them in a dark place, like a cave or deserted subway
tunnel. No weapon? Surround them with physical threats. If they're lacking
something vital, capitalize on that.
Make
Them Uncomfortable. Vulnerability sets the
character on edge and elevates their emotional state. So whenever you can, put the
character in a location where they have no experience, don’t know the rules, or
aren't really suited to navigate it. This can work for small- or large-scale settings,
from a character who has to traverse an alien planet to someone who's averse to
kids having to host a child's party.
Use
Symbolism. Nothing impedes progress like fear and
self-doubt. Think about which symbols can be added to the environment
to remind the character of an area of weakness, a past failure, a debilitating
fear, or an unresolved wound.
Add a
Ticking Clock. One sure-fire way to up the ante is to give
the character a deadline. Instead of them having unlimited time to complete the
goal, make them dependent upon elements within their environment, such as
having to avoid rush-hour traffic, reach the bank by four p.m., or get home
before sunset.
Setting-related
conflict is fantastic in that it can be endlessly adapted, helping you keep the
tension going in every scene no matter where your character is.
Want More Ideas on How to Unleash the Power of Conflict?
The Conflict
Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Obstacles, Adversaries, and Inner Struggles (Volume 1). It’s packed with ideas on how to apply meaningful conflict to
reveal your character, challenge them, and keep the story tense and on track.
It also digs into a plethora of conflict scenarios to help you plot fresh scenes.
Angela Ackerman is a writing coach, international
speaker, and co-author of The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression and its many sequels. Her bestselling writing guides are
available in eight languages, and are sourced by universities, recommended by
agents and editors, and used by writers around the world. She’s also one half
of the popular site, Writers Helping Writers, and co-founder of One Stop for Writers, a creativity portal loaded with
one-of-a-kind tools, resources, and a Storyteller’s Roadmap that makes
planning, writing, and revising a novel almost criminally easy.
